Passion's Killing Floor

What annoys me about the casting is that it's blatantly obvious three of them are wearing wigs and it looks so incredibly unnatural. There's a right way to wear a ...

Wow, this really tugs at my heart. Good job.

Jasper's back story was...interesting. It helped me understand and picture him better, but like I said, Eclipse seemed very forced. Perhaps it will have a larger significance in the next ...

A bit confusing, but it has great imagery. I can picture most of it in my head.

This has a great message and ryhmes well. Keep up the good work. :D Try using more punctuation to help make it a little clearer.

Holy Shnaz, this is great. I can really relate, and despite the fantasy elements it's very realistic. Definately a fun read.

It's quite lovely, good job. It's mysterious and makes me wonder why you must leave.

lol, i think guys in general are sexy when they're angry. well, when they're angry for a good reason, like when Edward was protecting Bella. It's fun to watch guys ...

It could use work. In my opinion it's incoherent. Consider taking out all the periods. It crowds the poem and takes away from it's simplicity. Unless you wanted to make ...

This is wonderful. I especially like the last line. It could use a little more description, so that one may clearly picture the horrors of war. Simply an opinion, perhaps ...

Excellent series in my opinion. All I can say to describe Eclipse though, is "What the hell." Definately my least favorite novel in the series, not to say I didn't ...

This vampire book my friend bought at the dollar store. It was very strange. I can't recall the title.